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authorLoui Chang <louipc.ist@gmail.com>2009-01-25 20:37:25 -0500
committerAaron Griffin <aaronmgriffin@gmail.com>2009-01-26 22:10:09 -0600
commit7a98a216dec70340a3627dd38f6862d1a4cfca82 (patch)
tree0ad47099e41f7bd58453c4741c17c4c93c349c06 /configs/install-iso
parent7ab1ae57c7158ce8df40c05f39658c2f781ac943 (diff)
Fix typos, formatting, and vague language where possible.
Signed-off-by: Loui Chang <louipc.ist@gmail.com> [Fixed menu.lst: LiveCD -> Live CD -aaron] Signed-off-by: Aaron Griffin <aaronmgriffin@gmail.com>
Diffstat (limited to 'configs/install-iso')
-rw-r--r--configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst4
-rw-r--r--configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt18
-rw-r--r--configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg2
-rw-r--r--configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg4
-rw-r--r--configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt2
-rw-r--r--configs/install-iso/instructions16
6 files changed, 24 insertions, 22 deletions
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst
index 067985d..b4ddc4c 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst
@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@ default 0
color light-blue/blue black/light-grey
splashimage=/boot/splash.xpm.gz
-title Boot ArchLinux LiveCD
+title Boot Arch Linux Live CD
kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75%
initrd /boot/archiso_pata.img
-title Boot ArchLinux LiveCD [Legacy IDE, no SATA]
+title Boot Arch Linux Live CD [Legacy IDE, no SATA]
kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75%
initrd /boot/archiso_ide.img
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt
index b25f56f..7720865 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt
@@ -2,15 +2,15 @@ HOW-TO: Contribute to this help
-------------------------------
This help is rather simplistic.
-In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a text
-file. Formatting is important (due to grub limitations). The files MUST be 80
-characters wide, and 23 lines long. Any more, and your formatting will be
-corrupted when viewing the help. Please note that if your help is short, it is
-worthwhile to pad with empty lines, up to 23 lines.
-
-Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the ArchLinux bug
-tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org
-
+In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a
+text file. Formatting is important (due to grub limitations). The
+files MUST be less than 80 characters wide, and 23 lines long.
+Any more, and your formatting will be corrupted when viewing the help.
+Please note that if your help is short, it is worthwhile to pad with
+empty lines, up to 23 lines.
+
+Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the
+Arch Linux bug tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg
index 551956a..5405c49 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
splash.rle
-ArchLinux Install and LiveCD (0e2009.0107)
+Arch Linux Install and Live CD (0e2009.0107)
0eF207 -> more boot options 0eF307 -> Troubleshooting, Help
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg
index 86a6af4..8e38bbe 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
Boot flavors on this ISO:
----------------------------------
-0earch07 : ArchLinux LiveCD [pata] (the Default)
-0earchide07 : ArchLinux LiveCD [legacy IDE mode]
+0earch07 : Arch Linux Live CD [pata] (the Default)
+0earchide07 : Arch Linux Live CD [legacy IDE mode]
0ememtest07 : Run memtest (Memory Testing)
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt
index 77417f3..213b3ae 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt
+++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-ArchLinux LiveCD - 2009.01
+Arch Linux Live CD - 2009.01
Release Notes
--------------------------
diff --git a/configs/install-iso/instructions b/configs/install-iso/instructions
index b14b456..cdf77ff 100644
--- a/configs/install-iso/instructions
+++ b/configs/install-iso/instructions
@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
- ArchLinux
+ Arch Linux
Installation and Live-CDs
----------------------------
-All CDs and USB-Images are installation mediums and Live-CDs,
+All CDs and USB images are installation mediums and Live CDs
which can be used as maintenance and rescue systems.
FTP-ISOs/Images:
----------------
-These are the preferred install mediums for ArchLinux. You get always
-the actual package versions using these mediums.
+These are the preferred install mediums for Arch Linux.
+You can always get up to date packages using these mediums.
archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO
archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.img i686/32bit USB-Image
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ ISOs with the isolinux bootloader:
Core-ISOs/Images:
-----------------
-These are for offline installations when no Internet access available
+These are for offline installations when no Internet access is available
to install the base system.
archlinux-200X.yy-core-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO
@@ -33,7 +33,8 @@ to install the base system.
How to use these installation images:
-------------------------------------
-Please ensure the sha1sum matches that in the SHA1SUMS file in this directory
+Please ensure the sha1sum for your downloaded file matches the checksum
+in the the SHA1SUMS file in this directory.
See section in the "Arch Linux Install Guide":
http://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Official_Arch_Linux_Install_Guide#Pre-Installation
@@ -42,4 +43,5 @@ For the USB-Images see:
Happy installing!
Happy ARCHing!
-- ArchLinux Release Engineering team
+- Arch Linux Release Engineering team
+